Showing posts with label Week 11. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 11. Show all posts

Thursday, April 8, 2021

Week 11 Story: Of Pearls and Private Eyes

    Marlowe sat in the smoky bar, twirling his empty bourbon glass on the table. He wanted another - and badly - but business had been slow of late and he didn't want to add any more to his tab. He sighed. He's have to head home soon- the cat would be getting hungry. 

    Just as he had started to put on his coat and amble out of the less-than-high-brow establishment, a man walked in. Now, in this particular bar, it was strange enough to see a new face. But a new face wearing tailored suit? That meant trouble. 

    "I'm looking for a man named Marlowe. Philip Marlowe." the man said. "Was told I could find him here." The man glanced around at the tables, wrinkling his nose at the smell of cheap whiskey and whatever had caused those stains on the back wall. 

    "Yeah, that's me." Marlowe said after a moment. "What are you doing looking for a man like me in a place like this?"

    "I need a PI. I've got a case that needs to be kept on the down low, and I've heard people say that you're the man to talk to if you want something solved fast and quietly." the man said, absentmindedly wiping his hands on the handkerchief he had pulled out of his pocket. As if that would wipe away the grime of this place. Marlowe could swear that he sometimes still felt it seeping out of his pores even after he got out of the shower. You stayed here long enough and the place just became a part of you, ya know?

    "What are the details?" Marlowe tried to play off his eagerness at a new job as interest in the facts of the case. Truth be told, he had been longing for something to do. Too much time alone to think was never healthy. Marlowe wanted to be busy, and some extra cash would be good too, he had to admit. 

    The man joined him at the bar, speaking in hushed tones and casting glances around the place to make sure that no one was paying them too much interest as he outlined his predicament. Turns out his wife had lost some trinket, and now everyone was in some big flap about it. Sounded like it had been stolen, but the house had state-of-the-art security, and none of it had been tripped the night of the supposed theft. Marlowe had dealt with cases like this before. Any time some bozo got their grubby little hands on something shiny that they shouldn't have, it was only a matter of time before they started wanting to show off. Give them a little incentive and saturate the market with rumors of some lesser version of what they'd got and - well - the poor suckers just couldn't help themselves.   Everyone wanted to be top dog, and if they had to incriminate themselves to get there, so be it. 

    "Yeah, I'll take the case. I charge twenty-five dollars a day, plus expenses." 

    Marlowe lit a cigarette and blew out a cloud of bitter smoke. Things were looking up. 

(Philip Marlowe, Private Eye. Source: Pixabay)


Bibliography: Babbitt More Jataka Tales. Story: The Girl Monkey and the String of Pearls

Author's Note: I am in a film class this semester, where we are watching and analyzing film noirs. Philip Marlowe is a character from a popular series of noir books that were later made into movies. I thought that the mystery outlined in the original story of The Girl Monkey and the String of Pearls would work well within a noir setting, so I did- a re-telling of the story (or the exposition to the story) within the world of smoky bars and private eyes.

Reading Notes, Babbitt More Jataka Tales, Part B

Bibliography: Babbitt More Jataka Tales. Story: The Brave Little Bowman

Notes: I have to admit, I was a little bit worried when reading this story that it was going to take a different turn than it did. I thought that it might end with the small man turning on the big man after he insulted him and leaving him to fend for himself when the other army came. I was then pleasantly surprised when the small man then went out to help the big man anyways. I had just read a couple of other Jataka tales (like Prince Wicked) that I thought had a pretty harsh view of morality. While I understand that there are plenty of morally questionable characters that do questionable things, I just am of the view that there is no situation in which it is OK to take someone's life into your own hands and condemn them to death (I think this viewpoint might be a large motivating factor to becoming a doctor- the whole "do no harm" thing and all...). 

The beginning of the story reminded me of Cyrano de Bergerac. It is one of my favorite plays, and I thought that this story shared some characteristics with it- someone that does not have the "look" acting through someone who does. I think it might be interesting to do a re-telling of this story in that storyline. Taking the story and transferring it to renaissance France would be quite the dramatic change, but I think it would work! Instead of doing battle and hunting as they do in the story, I think it would be possible to stay true to the Cyrano de Bergerac story and have poetry and letters substitute in for battle. As the climax of the story, Cyrano may have to act as an ambassador to the foreign king and write a treatise that appeases him. 

(Cyrano de Bergerac. Source: Wikimedia)


Wednesday, April 7, 2021

Reading Notes, Babbitt More Jataka Tales, Part A

Bibliography: Babbitt More Jataka Tales. Story: The Girl Monkey and the String of Pearls

Notes: I decided to keep going with the Jataka tales instead of moving on with the stories about Krishna because I was getting distinct Aesop's Fables vibes and I just really love those (I think it has a lot to do with nostalgia- my dad used to read them to me as bedtime stories). 

        Of the stories in part A of the "More Jataka Tales", I thought that a lot of them were somewhat strange in that they seemed like they were set up to have a moral, but then stopped just before telling the audience what that moral actually was supposed to be. This was one of the few stories that I though had an actually deducible moral. From what I could understand, there were a couple of different morals in this one: greed, showing off, ingenuity, and thanking the brains behind the operation. Now, while I think it could be interesting to create a moral for a story that does not (at least at surface level) have one (maybe fodder for the next reading notes?), I was also just more drawn to this story than the other ones, so here we are!

        This story does not have as many side characters that need their own narrative (like many of the Rama and Sita stories), nor does it have elements of the plot that I think need re-analysis (like the Wise and the Foolish Merchant story), so I think this story has the potential to do a re-telling, but in a different setting. This is not something that I have done before, so it ought to be a new experience! I am currently taking a film noir class, so I am feeling inspired by this: perhaps the soldier could be the PI hired to solve the case of the missing pearls....

(Private Eye. Source: Pixabay)


Week 14 Lab: Advice to Writers

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