Bibliography: Babbitt More Jataka Tales. Story: The Girl Monkey and the String of Pearls
Wednesday, April 7, 2021
Reading Notes, Babbitt More Jataka Tales, Part A
Thursday, April 1, 2021
Week 10 Story: The Wise and the Young Merchant
One fine day under the beating desert sun, a group of merchants gathered in the town square. Among them were two merchants who were going to be traveling the same path and selling the same goods. One of them was old and wise, and the other was young and had just begun to work as a merchant. When the young man heard that they would be travelling the same road, he immediately thought that it would be prudent to go first. That way his cows could feed on grass that had not yet been eaten and he could set the prices for his goods in the towns. As he was hurriedly packing his bags to leave, the old man approached him.
"Let us travel together." he said. "I know the way across the desert. These many years of travelling have taught me where the watering holes are and how to avoid the demons that would seek to carry you off! But my bones are growing weak and I could use your help in setting up camp and loading up my goods."
"But what of the cattle and the grass they will eat? What of the prices of our goods in the town?" replied the young man.
"If you travel with me, I will show you where the best grazing fields are. Both our cattle will arrive at the town fat and well-rested. Then, if we discuss what would be a fair price for us both, we can sell our goods together. That way, one of us can work at the stall while the other goes out and shepherds people to the tent." said the old man.
The young man pondered this offer, and decided to accept. Together, the young and the old man travelled across the desert. The old man knew not to trust a prince who cast no shadow, as it meant he was a demon. Once they had crossed the desert, the cattle feasted on fine, fresh grass in a hidden grove, the old man knew shortcuts to the town, and working together, there they sold all their goods.
Many years later, the young man's wagon was full with jewels, silks, and other finery to sell. Yet his bones had now begun to creak and he was no longer spry enough to load his own wagon or shepherd his own clients. But he had grown wise in the paths through the desert and how to cross it safely, and one day he met a young man one fine day under a beating desert sun. They were going to travel the same path and sell their goods in the same town.
"Let us travel together." he said. "I have been taught the way across the desert. I know where the watering holes are and how to avoid the demons that would seek to carry you off! But my bones are growing weak and I could use your help in setting up camp and loading up my goods."
The young man looked at him and pondered his offer...
Bibliography: Babbitt Jataka Tales. Story: The Wise and Foolish Merchant
Reading Notes, Babbitt Jataka Tales, Part B
Bibliography: Babbitt Jataka Tales. Story: The Wise and Foolish Merchant
Tuesday, March 30, 2021
Reading Notes, Babbitt Jataka Tales, Part A
Bibliography: Babbitt Jataka Tales. Story: A Measure of Rice
Thursday, March 18, 2021
Week 8 Progress
Looking back: So far, I am happy with my progress! I am honestly most proud of creating both a blog and a website and becoming baseline adept at navigating both- things are going well with both! I most enjoy writing stories and getting to put my own spin on them. So far, I have just been keeping with the designated schedule, so have not needed to use the extra credit options. I have also not made use of them to work ahead, since I have plenty going on as a baseline already.
Looking forward: At the end of March, my schedule clears up somewhat dramatically, so I hope to be able to spend more time in the writing of my stories. While I don't think that they have been bad, it has been a pitfall for them that I sometimes come up with a story that I deem to be "good enough". Perhaps unsurprisingly, stories are better when they are thought about and developed more.... I think this will also lead to me trying new things in my writing, though what they are I don't know yet. As I become more adept with using the website tools, I'll probably try to modify the look a bit, but frankly I'm pretty happy with it for now.
Wednesday, March 17, 2021
Week 8 Comments and Feedback
1. Feedback in.
I think that the quality of the comments that I have been getting so far have been really great! While it's always nice to get complimentary feedback, I find that the feedback that I find to be most useful is the constructive criticism. I like knowing what others see in my stories as room for improvement that I might not see myself.
2. Feedback out.
I try to always include that which I hope for in the comments of my own stories- constructive criticism with an emphasis on the "how". I try never to give a piece of advice unless I can also write out the way I would go about implementing that advice. I have really enjoyed reading other people's writing- it was what inspired me initially to incorporate more dialogue into my own stories, and after reading my first bit of micro fiction just recently, I am inspired to do the same!
3. Blog comments.
I don't necessarily know that I am getting to know people, as I am still having the randomizer assign me people I have not seen before. I am starting to get to the place, however, in which I am seeing familiar names more frequently, so I think my sense of familiarity with my classmates and their writing styles will grow as the class continues. I am happy with my intro- I think it's a pretty adequate portrayal of the things I am interested in and like to do!
4. Looking forward.
I think I will want to continue modifying the look of both my blog and website as I become more adept at using the software. I will continue to try to leave implement-able advice in my comments and minimize the "fluff" that surrounds this feedback.
Tuesday, March 16, 2021
Week 8 Reading and Writing
Looking Back: Overall, I think the assignments are going well! I have been really enjoying working on improving my writing, and have noticed the greatest improvement in including dialogue. For some reason, I just wasn't including it in my earlier stories, and I think that they have gotten better since then!
Definitely my favorite reading so far has been the Mahabharata. Although I have read it and watched it in the past, I guess I'm just consistent in my enjoyment of the epic!
As I am in the process of writing my stories, I generally don't look back at the reading notes. I tend not to include specific stuff in there, so I use the process of writing the reading notes much more as a springboard for creating story ideas.
Looking Forward: One of the most prominent things that I have noticed in terms of new strategies for research has been that this class has changed how I read books. I am an avid reader, and always try to make time each day to read at least a couple of pages. Recently, I have been reading my books more critically- looking at what storytelling tactics are used that I like or even just looking at the formatting of the story and using that to make my own writing better. I really want to keep doing this, not just because I think it is good practice in generally to read critically, but also because I really think it has changed (I think for the better) how I write stories!
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